Query + Synopsis Review

Get Your Query Letter & Synopsis Ready for Submission

 

Ready to submit your manuscript to agents or publishers but unsure about your query letter or synopsis? You’ve invested time and effort in your manuscript—now it’s time to ensure your submission stands out. With years of experience reviewing query letters, synopses, and first pages for agents and publishers, I specialize in helping authors like you perfect these essential documents so they catch the attention they deserve.

 

What You Get

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• Personalized Feedback: I’ll review your query letter and synopsis to make sure they highlight the strongest aspects of your story and your unique voice.

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• Actionable Advice: Receive clear, specific feedback to improve your pitch, tighten your story summary, and sharpen your tone to make a strong impression.

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• Expert Guidance: Having worked directly reviewing query letters, synopses, and first pages for agents and publishers, I know exactly what catches their attention—and what doesn’t. I’ll help you craft your documents to stand out in a competitive market.

 

Why This Matters

 

Your query letter and synopsis are often your first (and sometimes only) chance to impress agents and publishers. With the right guidance, you can ensure your submission package is compelling, professional, and ready for success.

 

How It Works

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1. Submit Your Query & Synopsis: Send me your drafts, and I’ll review them with an expert eye.

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2. In-Depth Review & Feedback: I’ll provide actionable feedback on structure, tone, clarity, and content, ensuring your query and synopsis make a strong impact.

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3. Revisions Included: After receiving my feedback, you’ll have the opportunity to revise your documents. I’ll review your updated drafts and provide further suggestions. This package includes 2 rounds of revisions to perfect your submission.

 

Optional Add-On: First 10 Pages Review

 

Want to make sure your first impression is as strong as your pitch? Add a First 10 Pages Review to your package. I’ll provide detailed feedback on your opening pages to ensure they grab attention from the first word.

 

Who This Service Is For:

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• Aspiring Authors: If you’re submitting your manuscript for the first time, I’ll help you ensure your query and synopsis are polished and ready to impress.

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• Authors Reworking Their Pitch: If your previous submissions haven’t gotten the responses you want, let’s refine your documents for better results.

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• Authors Preparing for Major Submissions: Ready to make your big submission? Make sure your submission package is as professional as it can be.

 

Pricing & Next Steps

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Full Package: $249

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Includes: One query letter review, one synopsis review, and 2 rounds of revisions.

 

Add-On: First 10 Pages Review: $79

 

Ready to get started? Hit the button below to fill out the contact form and take the first step toward perfecting your submission.

 

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