Your Path to a More Compelling Story Starts Here

 

Starting a writing journey is a huge achievement—but knowing what comes next can be challenging. Whether you’re nearing the end of your draft or have already written the first few chapters, a professional manuscript review is an essential step in refining your work and ensuring it stands out.

 

In this service, I’ll provide detailed feedback on everything from your plot and character development to pacing and writing style. You’ll gain a clearer understanding of your manuscript’s strengths and areas for improvement—plus, actionable advice on how to move forward. Whether you’re preparing to submit to agents, publishers, or self-publish, my manuscript review is designed to help you strengthen your work and prepare it for the next stage.

 

What’s Included:

 

Comprehensive Manuscript Feedback:

I’ll read your entire manuscript and provide an in-depth review of key areas including:

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• Plot structure and pacing

• Character development and arcs

• Writing style, tone, and voice

• Themes, settings, and dialogue

• Overall narrative cohesion

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Detailed Report:

You’ll receive a written feedback report outlining:

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• The manuscript’s strengths and highlights

• Specific suggestions for improvement

• Potential issues with flow, clarity, or logic

• Recommendations for next steps (editing, reworking scenes, etc.)

 

Follow-Up Discussion:

After you’ve reviewed the report, we’ll have a 1-hour follow-up discussion (via phone or Zoom) to address any questions, clarify points, or brainstorm strategies for improving your manuscript. This is your chance to dive deeper into any feedback you want to explore.

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Credit Toward Future Services:

As an added bonus, if you decide to book any other services (like a Developmental Edit or Coaching Session) within 6 months of your Manuscript Review, I’ll credit the full price of your review toward the cost of the new service. This makes it easy to continue refining your manuscript with support at every step of the way!

 

Why Choose This Service?

 

A Manuscript Review gives you a fresh, professional perspective on your work. If you’re feeling unsure about your plot, pacing, or character arcs, a professional reviewer can help illuminate areas that need attention—and suggest practical, targeted revisions. Think of it as an early investment in your manuscript’s success.

 

This review is designed for writers at all stages, whether you’re drafting, revising, or preparing to submit to agents or publishers. I’ll provide clear, actionable feedback tailored to your unique vision and goals for the manuscript. No cookie-cutter advice—just a thorough, personalized review that will help you see your manuscript from a new angle.

 

Who This Service Is For:

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• Aspiring authors who are ready to take their manuscript to the next level

• Experienced writers who want professional feedback before self-publishing or submitting to agents

• Writers seeking clarity on how to improve their manuscript and prepare it for the next steps

• Authors unsure of their manuscript’s market potential and who want insight into what works and what doesn’t

 

What You’ll Get Out of It:

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• Clear, actionable advice on how to improve your manuscript

• Insight into your strengths as a writer and what’s working in your story

• A better understanding of what the market (agents/publishers) might be looking for

• A clearer roadmap for revising, editing, and taking your manuscript to the next step

 

Note on Availability:

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To ensure every manuscript receives the care and attention it deserves, I only take on a limited number of manuscript reviews each month. This allows me to deliver thorough, thoughtful feedback tailored to your story. If slots are full, don’t worry—join my Priority Notification List to be the first to know when new spots open up. I’d love to work with you when the timing is right!

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Ready for Your Review? Let's Get Started:

 

Ready to elevate your manuscript? Whether you need feedback on plot, character development, pacing, or writing style, I’ll provide the detailed, professional insight you need to move forward with confidence.

 

Fill out the form below to join my Priority Notification List and I will get in touch with details as spots become available.